If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?
If I could rewrite one part of the story I would change the part where Cammie fights with Eloda (Cammie's trustee) and then starts smoking cigarettes to get her attention. I would rewrite that part because I thought that she had gone too far to try to get Eloda's attention so that she can be treated from Eloda the way she thought her mother would have. Though, what's very interesting is that at the end, when we get to read Eloda's diary we can see that she did catch her attention but that Eloda didn't want to act. I would rewrite that by skipping that part of the story. Other than that the book is great and cool to read.
- Nicolas, 7th grade, VLUS
