If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?
When Miranda (main character and narrator) is talking to the person who sends her little notes on little pieces of paper (not going to say who it is) she says "you" like she is talking to us/person reading the book and it was very confusing, I would change the "you" to the note-person's name or not talk to us about who she thinks it is at all.
- Kira, Grade 7, Vassal Lane
