If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?
I would change the part of how Cece became almost deaf, when I read it I didn't understand how what happened to her made her deaf, or almost deaf. I would make it painfully obvious that she became deaf because of "This." Like I would specify, Like say she came almost deaf because she was near an a explosion, which disrupted her eardrums, or something like that.
-Emie, 7th grade, Cambridge Street
