If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?
I love the DOrk Diary series since... Always! But to be honest, there is something that is bugging me all time when I read the first 20 pages of Drk Diary. It always starts out with Nikki and her crush Brian, blah blah blah. But then there is somthing bad happens, which is a good thing, but whenever you read a part of Dork Diary, you always know that there is going to be a problem with Mackenzie coming up to the scene. So there is a pattern going on in the story for each scene. So how I would like to change it up is that I would add more house drama to kind of relax through the story, because it happened to me that I just keep flipping through the pages looking for images. So I would kind of add more things that are that are non school related like Brianna, and house drama like Ms Bri Bri's hair salon or something.
In Conclusion, I am not teying to say that this book is bad or anything, but IF I could eddit a part, I would add other distractions in this diary so the story would be less boring, and more sense of humour!
-Sarah, 7th grade, Rindge Ave
