One thing I have to tell the author is that I like how the book is like one chapter August is speaking then other people are speaking in different chapters.Also, I noticed that was giving flashbacks for the readers so the readers can understand what happened in the past for the characters like if they were scared of something then they tell the story.Another thing is there are the good details the readers want to know and there are just the fluffy parts (The parts we don't need).-Eden, 6th grade, Cambridge Street
