If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?
I would rewrite the part where Chris and Sooz look at each other because they know something Dirk does not. I would actually just take that part out because then in the end it isn't such a surprise. I think if we are seeing it ( for the most part) trough different eyes, who don't know that much about the big thing they got pulled into, you kind of already know more than the main character does.
-Emilia, Grade 6, Vassal Lane Upper School
