If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?
If I had to change one part of the story, I would change the part where Brian ignores Susan. I would change that part of the story because I think Susan could be a good friend to him. In the book, Brian ignored Susan when she tried to make a connection with him. Brian felt that she was giving him too much attention. He wanted to be left alone. I think if Brian told Susan to give him a little more space, she could have been a good friend to him. She could be a way for Brian to reconnect with the modern world.
- James, Grade 6, Vassal Lane Upper School
