If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?
I would rewrite the part where Max-Ernest(main characters best friend) sees himself in the future so that instead he sees Cass(main character) in the future. I would change it because when Max-Ernest sees himself in the future as the writer of a book it changes him and it makes all of his dreams for the future kind of melt away.
- 6th grade
