If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?
Before he gets to Hogwarts, Harry is taken to the Order of the Phoenix headquarters, a place dedicated to stopping Voldemort, who is growing more powerful. Harry goes on trial for using the Patronus charm out of school. He gets off free. At school, there is a new teacher there, Professor Umbridge. She works at the Ministry, and is teaching the children that Voldemort does not exist. Anyone who disobeys her is punished. Harry, Ron, Hermione, and 20 others form a secret organization for practicing defense. In the end, they need the knowledge to fight the Death Eaters for a prophecy that could change everything. If I could rewrite one part of the story, it would be that Sirius dies
-Julia, 6th Grade, Cambridge Friends School