If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?
If I could re-write part of this story, I would change it so it turns out that AJ and Daisy are actually cousins. There is so much tension building up inside Daisy's mind when she thought that she and AJ were brother and sister, that I feel like they should at least end up cousins. I was disappointed because Wendy Mass made it seem important and then it wasn't. So, if I COULD re-write part of the story, that would be it.
Lyra, 6th Grade, CSUS
