If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?
I think Jaypaw(Jaykit) was blind from the beginning, but I wish Jaypaw(Jaykit) lost his sight because he and his littermates wanted to hunt for the fox cubs(what I mean is find the fox cubs), and when he fell off the cliff, he scratched his eyes badly, and he lost his sight. It also leaves a cliffhanger in the beginning because Hollykit and Loinkit said Jaykit has sharp hearing and nose. I am glad that Jayfeather is now feeling good about his blindness because he used have powers, and he can see in dreams!
-Amy, Grade 6, Vassal Lane Upper School
