If you could rewrite one part of the story, what would you change?
I actually kind of disagree with what Primo did when he desperately wanted to prove that he is the bravest and the best by going on a bridge and tried to talk to the Manalonga (The scariest witch in Benevento). So if I could rewrite one part of the story, I would just change the part where Primo went on the bridge and tried to talk with the Manalonga and make him do something else.
- Abdul, Grade 7, Vassal Lane Upper School
